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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
She sleeps beneath the river bed,where the water lilies grow, she runs in the forrest where the moonlight shows. She lays her body down in the soft sweet ground, she watches the tree limbs sway and listens to the sound. She cuts through the spaces of the sky 'till the stars shine bright, she waits for the pure velvet to return her light. She scatters glitter over head, she leaves white dust in her stead. Some say she is the darkness,some say she is the moon i just think that winter is a finely playing tune. No lyrics to her rhythm,no rhythm to her word, just a simple song that we have all heard... "Though thy crest be shorn and shaven,thou "i said" art sure no craven." Ghastly grim and ancient raven,wandering from the nightly shore,tell me what |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Great post of what is seen, In the midst of winter themes. Enjoyed reading such a smooth piece. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh I love the way you described her  Wonderful! Welcome! please check your email for a special greeting Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is a first rate effort..lovely images..welcome to passions.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
What a wonderful winter song! Welcome to Passions. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
A quite nice description, and I like the way the last stanza goes. "Come...dance with me, in my world of words." |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Really like your description of winter and as I sit here in a chilly house I enjoyed shivering to your nice little tune. |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Welcome to Passions. This is a very descriptive poem about Winter, and I like it. --Lil' Girl |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Well she was sure out today droppin little flakes of snow. Beautiful piece. Suzanne Welcome to Passions |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
thanks everyone |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Lovely imagery. And a belated welcome to Passions. With words like these you will be a fine welcome to the family. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
I have to agree with everyone here! Beautiful imagery, my dear! Portraying our Winter in splendor, I think I should take this and send her Your gorgeous work of art--so much alike To Winter's snowflakes in the night; Delicately woven, the pattern is clear! A masterpiece you have created here.  Great to hear from you Swamp! I don't think this is your first post though!  Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Swamp... I love this, especially... No lyric to her ryhme, no rythm to her word, Just a simple song that we have all heard. Very nice....Congrats on your (i don't think it's your) first post..... Best |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
thanks again ya'll and purple dragon,you're right this isn't really my first post =] but i've been gone (can it be almost a year?) a long time and couldn't remember my password and couldn't find it,so technicly i'm a new member "All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Creative look at Winter, the imagery was fantastic! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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