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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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(Mmm.. I wrote this for my special sum1, tho I haven't shown it to him, lol.. he doesn't like poetry.. =P I just thought I would show it to u guys first.. see if u like it..) luv, Lynne I searched through all the words, Previous poets have writ. I searched through all the books, Of ways to say I love you. But I didn’t find a way to tell you Just how much I love you In a way that's all my own. I love you I love you this much. And more.. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this was a cute little tidbit..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
YuLan~ Adorably done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You have read my thoughts! I was thinking about writing something very similar to this, but did not find the words. Very nice! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
hmmm short and sweet! he'll appreciate it!!! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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bb4thunder Junior Member
since 2000-12-17
Posts 12Berkeley, CA, U.S.A |
Very nice thought, well spoken.. nice read. Thunder |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
awww...this was sooo sweet...i loved it and im sure he would love it too write on |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Awwww...so sweet! I like all of the honesty! ~~Jamie  "Who does not love the Titanic? ...We all go: only a few, first-class." --David R. Slavitt, 1983 |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Aww, thank uuu! ^_^ Glad u like it.. I have to show it to him now.. *_^ Hope ya'll had a merry Christmas!! ^_^ Love, Lynne |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Show it to him Lynne. I'm sure he'll love it  |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thanx Munda.. ^_^ I sent it to him.. ^^ Love, Lynne |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
awww....the moment I started reading it...all I could picture was a cute stuffed animal something ...all cuddly innocent and sincere...and a man of very little brains..i appreciate the focused embodiment of this kind of affection...Kudos to you Sol |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
^_^ Thanx Sol.. Well, not quite sure what the man of very little brains was about, ^_^ Mm, I think this one is not so good, lol.. 'cuz I have never really written any love poetry.. but it's a change.. *_^ Thanx for reading *big smiles* Luv, Lynne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hi Lynne, how ya been? So nice to see you again! This is precious! How could he not like it? It comes from your heart!! Denise |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Hi Denise.. ^_^ Not too bad, thank u.. ^_^ Yes, and it's good to be able to post my poetry here again.. and read the great talent of the others here.. ^_^ Well, thank u.. ^_^ I hope so, lol.. Love, Lynne |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was beautiful.....nice one here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thanx Dopey.. *_^ Oh yeah, btw? He did like it, hehe.. ^_^ Luv ya'll, Lynne |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Well! If he doesn't like poetry, he's not good enough for you!!! lol, just kidding yulan, if you love him, that's all that matters! Great read Alicia |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Hehe, thanx Alicia.. ^_^ yeah, that's most important.. Luv, Lynne ^^ |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Yu Lan, Sometimes the unwritten words are all that's needed. Your eyes will tell him of your deep devotion. Melton |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
It may be an old chlice but it still works I love this. When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So...? What did he say when you gave it to him? Hummm? Did he respond in kind? [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-27-2001).] |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Yeah.. ^^ Yes, he did.. ^^ Not in poetry.. but same message..  (ooch, there is a really bright sun shining on my moniter! Such a glare! ^^) Thank you! Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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