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I Dreamed A Dream (repost from # 1 for Little Spyro) |
Denise
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I dreamed a dream of me and you Of kids who laughed the whole day through So long ago when all was new; I dreamed a dream that you've dreamt too. I dreamed of days that long are past Of special times that went too fast; The best of times - since unsurpassed; I dreamed of days not meant to last. I dreamed a dream not long ago Of kinder times - that children know; I'm still warmed by its after-glow; I dreamed a dream of long ago. I dreamed a dream of you and me; Of innocence and revelry; Of tranquil times quite trouble-free; I dreamed a dream of 'used to be'. Denise Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Aww, Denise! It's beautiful, like all your poems! What more can I say? I'm speechless! (Well, almost...) Thanks so much! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Denise
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Thanks, Sam! I'm glad you liked it! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
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I dreamed a dream not long ago Of kinder times - that children know; I'm still warmed by its after-glow; I dreamed a dream of long ago. I dreamed a dream of you and me; Of innocence and revelry; Of tranquil times quite trouble-free; I dreamed a dream of 'used to be'. denise this is SO perfect...simply beautiful. and perfect for our sweet sammy!! JM You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name And know my love and my desperation were one and the same... Baby it's alright... Take this pain and all this sadness It's alright Take this rain You're going to be free... Jackson Browne *I love you baby* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~denise as i am with all your poems, here i sit in awe...you have quite the talent woman! this was a wonderful poem about sam...such a sweet poem. thanks for sharing it with all of us. take care! amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Such a sweet expression of love!! Beautiful! |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
i dunno what to say except its beautiful and i love it good job |
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Denise
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Thank you everybody for reading and for your kind replies! I am glad that you liked it! Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Denise, I found this dreamy poem and of course you are the one to be the dream maker, beautiful poem. Cerenity |
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Mystykyl Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 32 |
THIS WAS A GREAT POEM...WHAT MORE CAN I SAY? I'M IN AWE. THANKS...IT INSPIRED A NEW POEM. =O)~ |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Poignant and wistful...very nice Denise...Oh to be dreamt of. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
I loved this. It was so beatufil... ~Susie~ |
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Denise
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Thank you Cerenity, Misty, Twinsgd and Angel for your lovely comments! They are always appreciated! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Denise .... wonderful, wonderful poem !!!! Thank you for taking me back in time for a warm rememberence .. I love this piece ..... |
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Denise
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Thank you, Pepper, I'm glad it took you back to those wonderful times! Glad to see you back too!! Denise |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Denise, This is absolutely beautiful, and with such love behind it. It certainly put a warmth in my heart while reading it. Sheila |
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Denise
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Thank you Sheila! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Denise |
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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
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its such a beautiful sentiment captures the essense of so many relationships which once were but now exist only in memories |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Denise, Lovely poem. I like poems about dreams. ~Gene |
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Denise
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Thank you Wonderous and Gene! I'm glad you both liked this! Denise |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
sweet reminiscence with a bit of sadness for days left behind. seems the story of life. wonderful poem! |
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Denise
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Thank you, Danni for reading and for your kind words! |
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