Love Divine(maybe my best,what do u think)

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Love Divine(maybe my best,what do u think)

raleighbttrfly
Member

since 2000-11-21

Posts 160
Raleigh NC

0 posted 2000-12-15 10:53 AM

Your damaged heart speaks to me
Your pain has been made mine
The tears you cry fall from my eyes
In this love divine

The sorrow you whispered softly goes by
But the sound of the pain will never die
The guilt that beats in your heart beats in mine
There is so little distance between you and I

You pray for an end
I long for a start
And it is only ourselves we make fall apart
Living in this lie of love divine

Bitter regret that won’t heal with time
Our souls we have shared now intertwined
Tears fall in rivers washing away the lines
Forming a landscape of our love divine

The pain still so new the scars faded and old
Nightmares come and some never go
All that is yours you make it now mine
And this we call a love divine

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I am not always lonely even if I am always alone

[This message has been edited by raleighbttrfly (edited 12-16-2000).]

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2000-12-15 05:48 PM

very well done..I liked this a lot..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2000-12-15 07:33 PM

I agree with pegasus, this is lovely

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.

shira
Member

since 2000-12-12

Posts 88
Hamburg, PA

3 posted 2000-12-16 08:32 PM

Very nice... a bit sad and haunting too.. I like this.

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

4 posted 2000-12-16 11:09 PM

^_^ I think this is beautifully written.. a sad description, mm? But I think it's great, raleigh.. very relaxed style. I haven't read any of your others..
One thing, did u mean to write

"And it is only 'are' ourselves we make fall apart" Is the 'are' meant to be there?

Love,
Lynne
PS I'm going to read some of your other poetry now, lol.. ^_^

[This message has been edited by Yu Lan (edited 12-16-2000).]

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