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wildflower New Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 1 |
*This had been deleted at the author's request* Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Wildflower! This poem is full of pain. Very well expressed. Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions! Denise |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
You write this pain so beautifully. Someday, wildflowers will bloom again, perhaps in Spring or Fall, there is a time for every season. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Welcome to Passions, and a very lovely first post this is, and I think a companion piece to another post from today?  Glad to have you with us.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome Wildflower...lovely to have you here these two lines: 'sleep can only come in a fitful doze that the broken heart has imposed' are ones I can relate to...it's the little death that keeps you safe inside sometimes. Hugs K |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I really like the imagery you use in this poem. Welcome to Passions ! |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
yes welcome nice couplets here and you managed to keep the rhyming not too obvious even throwing in a few half or threequarter rhymes good job philip |
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