navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » Beneath the words into the heart
The Corner Pub
Post A Reply Post New Topic Beneath the words into the heart Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-12-09 07:01 PM


These words of lovers
adoration,
flow gently to my
ears,
but where the courage
will be found,
to let them penetrate
the heart?

I see cherish in your
eyes,
I feel loves warmth
in your embrace.
But I cannot delve
into your heart,
to know the truest
part of you.

So courage leaps,
and heart disolves,
to let your love
embrace.

Fear is never love,
and love is all.

So I shall drown
in oceans love.
Tis always worth
all mortal pain.

To never give all
heart sublime,
is never to have
lived.

So love of mine,
I am yours,
forever and a day.

Tread gently as you go.

Caress this heart
you have won,
with tender words
and cherished ways,
That love may bloom
in fullest flower.

Eternal lovers
of summers sweetest
kiss.
< !signature-->

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton






[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 12-09-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-12-09 07:40 PM


yummy..you sure know how to woo a fella Ellie..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Suzanne Arlene
Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-12-09 07:45 PM


WOW  that just melted in my mouth like an M & M      oh just too good . Suzanne
kcsgrandma
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
3 posted 2000-12-09 11:55 PM


Fear is never love,
and love is all.

So I shall drown
in oceans love.
Tis always worth
all mortal pain.

To never give all
heart sublime,
is never to have
lived.

*************

I love these thoughts, Ellie - my philosophy of love in a nutshell, I guess.     Very nice, as always.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 2000-12-10 03:42 AM


A beautiful poem Ellie !
WEEBEE3
Junior Member
since 2000-09-28
Posts 36

5 posted 2000-12-10 05:06 AM


WOW Ellie,
This has a pure magical touch without the faries in view-  only a  pure, elegant, classy expression of the reasoned risk of love! Very Loverly (and lovely too!!!)  A Froggy Delight,

3 Frogs are better than one!  (Ü)(Ü)(Ü)

[This message has been edited by WEEBEE3 (edited 12-10-2000).]

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
6 posted 2000-12-10 08:27 PM


Ellie~
Very pretty thoughts.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
7 posted 2000-12-10 09:30 PM


"I see cherish in your eyes" ~ Oh Ellie, how beautiful...your tender heart just shines in this... Bonnie
bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
8 posted 2000-12-11 01:48 PM


Ellie....

Oh, how lovely this is...it just flows and flows....Wonderful...as always.

Best

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
9 posted 2000-12-11 11:10 PM


What a beautiful sentiment.   I love the way you wrote this!
Wobbly Head Bob
Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA
10 posted 2000-12-12 03:38 PM


Unique and curiously mouth watering!  I really liked the 10 tons of feeling so gently flowing! Thanks for the read!
Lady Lost
Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

11 posted 2000-12-13 06:42 AM


awww Mom....I love this!  When is it my turn to find true love?  Oh wait...I already have!  You know him well...he's the guy who leaves his little socks under your couch     This is beautiful, mom!

...beth

[This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 12-13-2000).]

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

12 posted 2000-12-13 07:09 AM


Ooooh very nice, tender loving thoughts  
enjoyed it very much  

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this wouldn't be enough"
"Maree Russo"


Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
13 posted 2000-12-13 11:45 AM


Ellie,
  What a beautiful expression of love. With the risk considered, love has won out! Wonderful tender read!
Dennis :^)

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » Beneath the words into the heart

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary