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SystemErroR
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since 2000-12-03
Posts 13


0 posted 2000-12-05 11:11 AM


You flirt.   I try.
Love awakens.  I ask why?
My heart is timid, while yours runs free.
You shelter my soul.  Making me believe.

You smile.   I sigh.
Role reversal.   I ask why.
My heart is numb, while yours runs free.
Where have we gone?  I'm still me.

You leave.   I cry.
Shattered dreams.   I ask why.
My heart is breaking, while yours runs free.
What happened to us.  I'm blind.  Can't see.


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raleighbttrfly
Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160
Raleigh NC
1 posted 2000-12-05 12:30 PM


Wow that was powerfull!!
I hope to see more from you soon.


P.S.
I saw your email, I lived in NH awhile back small town called Hill, ever heard of it?



Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
2 posted 2000-12-05 02:56 PM


This is good, love the way you show the emotion

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
3 posted 2000-12-07 03:17 AM


Anybody get the license plate of the semi that just hit me?  J/J.  This is a powerful poem.  It left me speechless for a moment.  Can't wait to see more from you.  Always,
  Broken Winged Angel  

pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
4 posted 2000-12-07 05:40 AM


an interesting play on the words..good stuff..keep them coming.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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