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None..........As of Yet

SystemErroR
Junior Member

since 2000-12-03

Posts 13

0 posted 2000-12-05 11:11 AM

You flirt.   I try.
Love awakens.  I ask why?
My heart is timid, while yours runs free.
You shelter my soul.  Making me believe.

You smile.   I sigh.
Role reversal.   I ask why.
My heart is numb, while yours runs free.
Where have we gone?  I'm still me.

You leave.   I cry.
Shattered dreams.   I ask why.
My heart is breaking, while yours runs free.
What happened to us.  I'm blind.  Can't see.

raleighbttrfly
Member

since 2000-11-21

Posts 160
Raleigh NC

1 posted 2000-12-05 12:30 PM

Wow that was powerfull!!
I hope to see more from you soon.

P.S.
I saw your email, I lived in NH awhile back small town called Hill, ever heard of it?

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2000-12-05 02:56 PM

This is good, love the way you show the emotion

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

3 posted 2000-12-07 03:17 AM

Anybody get the license plate of the semi that just hit me? J/J. This is a powerful poem. It left me speechless for a moment. Can't wait to see more from you. Always,
Broken Winged Angel

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

4 posted 2000-12-07 05:40 AM

an interesting play on the words..good stuff..keep them coming.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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