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nicolette Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42St. Paul, Minnesota |
I am a mouse in a cage trapped between two worlds. One promising an ending and inner peace. The other promising satisfaction to all my curiosities. I am trapped by my indecision. I fear both worlds. Shut out by others I know not which way to turn. Spin on my wheel day after day, afraid to get off that I may never get back on. So I spin and spin not understanding why. I am trapped between two worlds... both tugging at my soul... my mouse soul. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nicolette...sometimes, the mouse roars...it can happen... Welcome to Passions! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ahhh..between a rock and a hard place..I know it well. welcome to passions  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Welcome, little mouse. That's quite a dilemma, to choose between what is known and safe, no matter how confining, and what is unknown and maybe dangerous, but perhaps more satisfying. Not an easy choice to make. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a wonderful analogy! I hope you get off that wheel soon! Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nicolette~ Welcome to the posting side of Passions. We are so glad you're here. You'll fit right in - cuz we love meeces to pieces ! ! But should you venture over to Open Beware the Balladeer He's the exterminator ... and is to be feared !  Some say he's a RAT but, I wouldn't go as far as that ! But suffice it to say ... RUN if you see him coming this way ! ! Nice write, poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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nicolette Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42St. Paul, Minnesota |
Sunshine, Thanks for the welcome. It will happen...I'm just incredibly impatient. Pegasus111 and kcsgrandma, thanks for the welcome. I appreciate it. Poet deVine, thanks again. Marge, I will check out the open and watch out Balladeer. Advice well heeded. Thanks. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi there, welcome to passions!  i see that you have been a member for quite some time and am glad that you decided to toss in a poem...dont be shy,okay, the people at the Pub are real nice(me included) and im sure you will have AWESOME times here sharing your work... i like this piece...firstly, i have often felt like that and secondly, i like the analogy of your dilemma to that of a mouse always spinning on a wheel..... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Nicolette, Welcome to Passions! I really enjoyed your poem, it is one I can certainly relate to. Well Done Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Hello, I am new also, but haven't been brave enough to post a poem. I love your "mouse" and think I live close to it in that wall! Anyway, love the words. ME |
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nicolette Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42St. Paul, Minnesota |
Kalie-everyone is great here - you included. Thanks for the welcome. Dark Angel - Thanks for the encouraging words. I appreciate it. Mother Earth - Try posting one. It's not so bad... and you have my full support. Thanks for the vote of confidence. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
nicolette, i really enjoyed this one! i guess ur mouse is not oni capable of spinning wheels, it has the expressiveness of a poet and the sweet humor of an angel! great one! I really love this! Welcome again to Corner Pub *winkZ* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Nicollete Welcome to the Corner Pub...I hope you enjoy your stay here.. sometimes mice will roar.. and the effect is astounding.. I really enjoyed this and hope to see more. Always, Broken Winged Angel.  |
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