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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Snowflakes in the wind Like a shaken up snowglobe Who just shook my world? 12-3-2000 |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
World turned upside down and then shaken up a bit magic then is seen I cuoldn't help jump in, this is so magical and inspiring! Another jewel in thy majestic Haiku crown! Love, Sis P.U.Y.M.B. Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Dennis, I love snow globes, but never thought of snow as an earth-shaking experience.  Interesting perspective.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
very very nice Dennis. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, I really enjoyed this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
A wonderful wintertime perspective-- We see the hardships of the colder months, we might as well enjoy the compensating beauties as well. Another delightful verse,Bro! Love, David To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi dennis, you seem to incorporate a darker tone in your haiku/senryu offerings these days...that last line "why am i so blue" from your Why haiku just echoes in my mind every now and then and now this one...its nice to witness the grwoth of a poet, dennis  |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Dennis, Well done. I enjoyed your use of a ? to end your poem. Of course, one might also end with a statement: God just shook my world... Indeed an interesting observation and perspective! WRITE MORE! INclan |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Dennis, Such a delightful Haiku you wrote here, and at the moment it seems someone just shook the snowglobe outside my window. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent here with us |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Nice work here. Yes someone did shake the snow globe outside my window as well here this morning. Shook my world all up and seems to have shaken my blah mood up into a great mood. Dawn |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Very nice, as always Dennis! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dennis, Wonderful poetry, I love snow from a far, yep real far away, or a globe would be wonderful too, born and raised in sunny California, loved this one thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
surreal yet cheeky......hehehe this is so cute! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Sweet poem! Nice how you started with something seemingly on the outside, and then brought it in. Interesting style |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Dennis, you always make haiku sound so easy, while I know how hard they are to write. I hope you never cease to amaze me like you did just now. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful, as always, Dennis! Denise |
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