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Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469


0 posted 2000-12-01 03:55 PM


We snuck inside at Midnight,
Into the Tower of Banshee
Her wailing voice and crying eyes
We did not hear or see.

Now Bunny has a thing with Fae.
He can find them right away.
Ageless friends they are to him,
and cards they often play.

Locked within the Tower
The Fairy's gave faint light.
Each one chained by darkest powers
Each one a hopeless sprite.

Now a Bigfoot is not magical.
Except in natural ways.
But with one giant rending grasp,
He broke the magic chains away!

At once their hearts on fire!
Burning bright for all to see!
" Hush now." Lady whispered.
" You all must follow me."

We crept back down the Tower stairs.
With all the rescued Fae.
We made it to the Hummer.
And filled it right away.

" My name is Thistle" said one fairy.
" We must to Loch Ness be away!"
" For the Banshee hunts for Nessie!"
" Ere come the break of day!"

Now the thing about a Bigfoot,
Is that they have HUGE FEET!
Squatch he floored the Hummer,
and made the tires screech!

The morning light was coming.
Golden painted was the sky.
Squatch found and played a CD,
to use as his ' war cry'

Bagpipe music, filled the Hummer
Windows shook to "Scotland the Brave"
So now begins our battle!
For our friend Nessie we must save!!

© Copyright 2000 Adam M.M. Stevanovic' - All Rights Reserved
Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
1 posted 2000-12-02 12:00 PM


I'm so hooked! What's next???
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2000-12-03 12:55 PM


wonderful story..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


kaile
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146
singapore
3 posted 2000-12-04 02:03 AM


hi there,

i may be silly here but i smiled real wide when i read these two lines:

Now a Bigfoot is not magical
Except in natural ways

anyway, on with my reading

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

4 posted 2000-12-05 07:33 AM


Debbie and Peg...i'm glad you are enjoying the ride..
Kaile...silly??? No....maigc..although perhaps 'handy ' at best....is never as important as what we can do with what we are....that's true magic.....  

Sol  


[This message has been edited by Solstice Son (edited 12-05-2000).]

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
5 posted 2000-12-07 04:21 AM


  Delightful as always...Thanks for the well needed smile this put on my face... Gotta go read the next one now.....
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