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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Rings around the moon Frosty breath hangs suspended Between heav'n and earth Hoot owl, nearby tree Alerts of this intrusion Echoes through meadow Weary travelers rest Chill engulfs body and soul Last thoughts of warm home 12-1-2000 [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 12-01-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Breathtakingly beautiful. *sighing here* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Wonderful, Bro...You're still the King! Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
"echoes through meadow" lovely, Dennis. Joy |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
VERY nice, haiku king  i like ..however..i'm gonna have to go get me a blanket now..  hugs, g< !signature--> "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 12-01-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was great. Just like all your others. You're so good at haiku's!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This reminds me of "Stopping by the Woods on a Snowy Evening", though I'm not sure why. Nice feeling to this, Dennis. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Dear Dennis, I would say that with Haikus You have hit your stride But I would be wrong Your talent's so diversified! But you always give us A Portion of your Best With your wisdom,humor or descriptiveness Here we are truly Blest! Love, David To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White) |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I am sooooo jealous...lol the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
somehow, i liked the title a lot...i guess "weary" is a word i relate to a lot...and i must say that your last line "last thoughts of warm home" jolted me a little  |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Dennis, Man, that is cold(!)...beautiful, but really cold. Must be why they call diamonds, "ICE." INclan |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Dennis, The image of travelers in the cold night, really comes through in this one! I love the first stanza, especially this line; "Frosty breath hangs suspended" and your last line changed the tone of your poem for me in a big way; "Last thoughts of warm home" It gave me the shivers! Really, really nice job! |
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