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Heartspeak Sonnet |
kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Heartspeak Sonnet In quietness you come, but not in peace. The torture in your soul robs you of thought. The agony you feel has no release. You mourn your own existence, overwrought. I reach for you to tell you that I care. I look for meaning in your smallest word. Your sorrow I'm unable to repair My helplessness can't fix what has occurred. Though silent still, yet now you speak to me. I understand your deep unuttered cry. How eloquent your wordless fluency, What volumes written in your smallest sigh! Your heart communicates the words you lack And in compassion my heart will talk back. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
What volumes written in your smallest sigh! Your heart communicates the words you lack And in compassion my heart will talk back. beautifully written, kc ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A truly wonderful sonnet ! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marilyn; This is simply exquisite and beautifully written....wow...Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
great piece, Marilyn.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I have not tried a sonnet yet, but this is the nicest i've heard so far Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KCS~ Very nice thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Wynter - Thank you, and thank you for picking out those lines. The thought of hearing each others' hearts was the inspiration for this piece. Munda - Thank you for the wonderful. Ellie - "Exquisite" and "wow"! I'm overcome. Thank you! Pegasus - Thank you for your kindness. Maria - That is music to my ears! You should try it some time. You might really enjoy it. Marge - Thanks for your always welcomed replies. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marilyn- very beautiful, my friend.. isn't it wonderful when hearts learn to communicate.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Vicky - Yes, my friend, it is very wonderful, even more wonderful when they seem to have known how forever. Thank you. hugs To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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