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Day of Destiny..part 5..Firerflies and Sand |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
We got back to my house just me and Destiny she was staying one more night Des liked it here with me We sat out on the back porch counting more fireflies her face serene and saintly with starlight in her eyes " I see you don't know Omar' said destiny to me 'I thought I recognised him my mind with dja vu was seized' " Oh , you've seen him all your life" des smiled and looked at me " No one lives without him, his talents all life needs." ' What does he do??' I asked 'How does bowling prolong life??' Destiny laughed quietly her heart now free from strife " Omar is the Sandman. the Weaver of all Dreams" I smiled and I nodded then 'More than a bowler it would seem' " yes...he's known me always I invited him tonight he, like me, oft needs a friend, when life is not quite right." ' You both here have a haven' said I with sincere heart she fluttered up and kissed my cheek I was blushing in the dark Just then I saw old Omar out the corner of my eyesight suddenly quite sleepy to des i said G'night. She tucked me in I think its hard for me to say but ever since, I have been friends with Omar and Destine Fae. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Enjoyable again...And even though I don't want the story to end, I've got to go read the epilog now.. ![]() |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
SolSon, Your cast of characters is amazing, and you develop them so well, right before our eyes! Pure Magic! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
These are so much fun....on to the ending.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Sol.... Everytime I enter the Pub, I scan the new poems looking for your newest adventure... And it always brings a smile to my face when I see one there. Best |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Another wonderful tale. I always love reading your work. Brightens my day up completely! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
* blushes several shades of crimson....* Thank you one and all.... Sol ![]() |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
no need to blush....when you write such good work.... this reminds me of a more appreciable time when i only knew how to anticipate the newest adventures of Carebears, Talespin and the Smurfs.... well , now i have your poetry.... ![]() |
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