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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA ![]() |
Icicles forming on limbs of stately oak tree's winter gown of lace as mornings rising sunbeams dance rainbows to adorn her Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
wow, this is really beautiful Ellie ![]() Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, Breath taking view! You've captured winters splendor! Well Done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You have captured one of the most beautiful scenes of winter. A lot of description in a few words! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Ellie! I love it! Denise |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i really loved the last line, ellie..what a beautiful description! ![]() "dance rainbows to adorn her" |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
My goodness who needs a Christmas tree with an Oak like that nearby! |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh this was great. I dont like the cold though...brrrrr ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow Ellie! Exquisitly expressed. I am not fond of Winter, but your tanka has made me change my mind, I'll learn to appreciate it more ![]() Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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