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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME 
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School Musical Early auditions Tears and triumphs all around Casting the school play Nightly rehearsals Learning choreography Fearing disaster Backstage in chaos Props and costumes are misplaced Last dress rehearsal Nerves heard in voices Jam-packed auditorium On opening night Sparkly-eyed young girls Quietly singing along Dreaming of stardom Tall lanky young men Voices unreliable Sing tender love songs Knowing the whole script Proud parents bearing flowers Giving rave reviews Wistful young extra Hearing others' accolades Hoping for next year Practical jokesters Ad-libbing inside humor Final performance Dropped program inserts Echoes of standing ovation Empty theater To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marilyn- this is awesome!  you have such a talent for putting these little ditties together to tell a story... and what wonderful snapshots you've created in my mind... i feel like i was there. i love this!! hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KCS~ What lovely memories you've penned. An event to send the spotlights searching. Wonderfully done. 'standing ovation' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I reflect the applause for yopur poetry..........great read. Jon |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Vicky - Thank you, my friend. It filled some time while waiting for the curtain to open on the sixth performance. Wish you could have been there. hugsMarge - *bowing on cue* Thank you for the standing ovation. School musicals are a big tradition here, and the whole town comes out for them. Glad you enjoyed this. Jon - Thank you also for your applause. All three of you are favorite poets of mine, and I appreciate your comments greatly. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
kcsgrandma, this is great, I could see it all happening felt like I was there Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
wow, beautifully done! Haiku story telling and it flows perfectly. Great job. Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marilyn, Wonderful progression and all in haiku form! Well Done! Well written! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Maree, Ellie, Dennis - Thank you. As the mother of two aspiring actresses, I have been here many times. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
kcsgrandmother, you just brought a new dimension to my concept of senryu..i never would have thought that one could compose an entire story(and such a vivid one at that) using the unique 5-7-5 syllable count.... thanx for the inspiration..like the others, i applaude for you |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Kaile - I'm glad you stopped by, as you said you like this form. Thank you kindly for your applause. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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