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Glowing Fireflies |
Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Glowing Fireflies Out on the porch, As the sun disappears, A magical ballet unfolds; Glowing fireflies.. Enchanting little dancers, Slow dancing in pairs, Talented performers; The stars of their show. Shining doll-house lamps, Lighting up the night, Crowding ‘round in cooling air; Cobwebbed porch and broken bulb. A couple break away, Fly off into the night, Zipping past the apple tree, Bumbling out of sight. I wonder how they see their way, When bottoms light their trail, Not in front, behind instead, Showing where they’ve been. Cross-legged in the cold night air, My legs I cannot feel. My eyes are riveted above, Watching lives of light bulbs. Out on the porch, ‘Neath the stars and the moon, A magical ballet unfolds; Glowing fireflies.. -Lynne |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome back,Yu Lan!!hope all is well this brought back sweet memories of the few times when i got to witness the grace of fireflies....Enchanting creatures they are thanx for sharing....delighted to read this |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yu Lan, Hi Enchanting little dancers, Slow dancing in pairs, Talented performers; The stars of their show. indeed they are! enjoyed the read very much Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Very nice. enjoyed the read. It brought back a lot of memories. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Yu Lan; I love these magical little creatures! Your poem puts them in a charming "Light"! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
YuLan~ I just watched this same ballet- and was wondering if you knew Just exactly where they get those tiny florescent tutu's ? *This was a lovely piece, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I really enjoyed all of this, and like everyone else, I love to watch the fireflies when they are in season here, but I especially got a smile from I wonder how they see their way, When bottoms light their trail, Not in front, behind instead, Showing where they’ve been. This is a very good question, and I'm surprised I never though of it before. Thanks for the smiles. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you everyone!! ^_^ Kaile, yes, everythingz fine... I am studying for my exams now.. and also got a part time job for a while! Thanx.. ^^ Maree.. glad u enjoyed it.. ^_^ Thank u.. u know, I have actually never seen one.. Thanx Alan.. ^_^ Ellie.. ^_^ Yep.. li'l light bulbs.. Marge... yep, there are ballet shops for fireflies.. =P hehe.. thanx.. Marilyn -- thanx 4 reading... glad u smiled.. =P -Lynne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, Lynne! Denise |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thanks Denise! ^_^ Lynne |
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