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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-11-18 10:14 PM



In Circle Of Loving Spirit
~*Marge Tindal*~

And then she comes to me
winging on wounded spirit
circling in my thoughts
I gently take her in
and hold her to me
until she's mended
With gentleness
I release her
to the sky
she soars
again

~






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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kcsgrandma
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1 posted 2000-11-18 11:13 PM


What beautiful, gentle thoughts you have written here, Marge!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Denise
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2 posted 2000-11-18 11:22 PM


Very pretty, Marge!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-11-18 11:33 PM



Marge-
   this is so soft and gentle...
   i love it.  
   brought a smile to my face.  

   hugs,
   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
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4 posted 2000-11-18 11:39 PM


Marge,

This is a very beautiful poem here. Hope someday to be able to learn to write the form poems. I really do love them.

                                 Dawn

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-11-19 12:42 PM


KCS~
Thank you so much.
Some little spirits just need to be held to be healed.
That's my job !

Denise~
Thank you, fellow-Patricius !

Vicky~
I appreciate your smiles.
Thanks for understanding.

Callie~
I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it.
They are really just words that take on
the form themselves -
with a little manipulation here and there.
If I can help at all, please e-mail me.
I'll be glad to assist.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2000-11-19 08:56 AM


Aw Marge ~ Only the gentlest of hands could have penned such a tender piece...So lovely.  Bonnie
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7 posted 2000-11-19 09:41 AM


Marge; This poems lovelines comes from a healing spirit that you so beautifully posess. ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



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8 posted 2000-11-19 10:17 AM


awww I love this one, sooo beauiful

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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9 posted 2000-11-19 11:23 PM


Bonnie~
Thank you, my friend.
Gentle hearts hold gentle spirits in gentle hands.
I do try.

Ellie~
Such sweet words, dear lady.
Thank you.

Maria~
Thank you so much.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2000-11-20 11:47 AM


you do this so very well, my friend....

and you soar....


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




bestgirl911
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11 posted 2000-11-20 02:25 PM


Marge,

How beautiful your words...as they always are....

Best

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12 posted 2000-11-25 08:23 PM


Karilea~
Sometimes it's just necessary for the healing -
so we hold another's spirit until it can soar on it's own.
Thanks.

BestGirl~
Thank you so very much.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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