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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-11-18 02:04 PM



Fluttering Fancy Free

Fresh-colored splendor
From cocoon now surrendered
Flutters butterfly
Flitting amongst the flowers
Finding freedom's wings at last



*Maria, I Fanka-U for the inspiration !
~*Marge*~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Dennis L. White
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1 posted 2000-11-18 02:16 PM


Marge,
  This is a beautiful tanka, and splendid thanks for the inspiration Maria afforded you!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



ethome
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2 posted 2000-11-18 06:14 PM


tanka you very much this is a very beautiful poem and it doesn't suprise me coming from you Marge.
Moon Dust
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3 posted 2000-11-18 07:08 PM


Glad I could inspire you to write such a beauiful piece

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


kcsgrandma
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4 posted 2000-11-18 10:56 PM


Very nice, and warming, to be thinking of butterflies now.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Denise
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5 posted 2000-11-18 11:17 PM


Very beautiful, Marge!

Denise

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6 posted 2000-11-19 05:47 AM


fabulous, fresh, fun funky fanka
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-11-19 12:58 PM


Dennis~
I so greatly appreciate you.

ETHome~
I think I like not surprising you !

Maria~
You did and I thank you.

KCS~
Not hard to do here in Florida,
when they are flitting around in 80 degree weather here today.

Denise~
Thanks, hon.

Kaile~
LOL - ya' got it !


Go out in the yard
If you see a butterfly
It won't be too hard
To pen a tiny poem
Cause that's how butterflies are !


~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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8 posted 2000-11-24 03:24 PM


What a beautiful one!
I loved it........

keep em rollin!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-11-24 06:36 PM


DD~
So pleased to know you enjoyed it.
Thank you for the pleasant reply.

Flitting Butterfly
Wings upward to the flower
Sweet nectar delight


~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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