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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Fluttering Fancy Free Fresh-colored splendor From cocoon now surrendered Flutters butterfly Flitting amongst the flowers Finding freedom's wings at last *Maria, I Fanka-U for the inspiration ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marge, This is a beautiful tanka, and splendid thanks for the inspiration Maria afforded you! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
tanka you very much this is a very beautiful poem and it doesn't suprise me coming from you Marge. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Glad I could inspire you to write such a beauiful piece Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Very nice, and warming, to be thinking of butterflies now. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
fabulous, fresh, fun funky fanka |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ I so greatly appreciate you. ETHome~ I think I like not surprising you ! Maria~ You did and I thank you. KCS~ Not hard to do here in Florida, when they are flitting around in 80 degree weather here today. Denise~ Thanks, hon. Kaile~ LOL - ya' got it ! If you see a butterfly It won't be too hard To pen a tiny poem Cause that's how butterflies are ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
What a beautiful one! I loved it........ keep em rollin! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DD~ So pleased to know you enjoyed it. Thank you for the pleasant reply. Wings upward to the flower Sweet nectar delight ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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