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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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just an oldie i felt like posting...  ____________________________________ sailing with the multitude wherever they lead my heart dreams of different waters to sail alone on a sea of dreams to a distant shore all my own my heart begs me, 'go' but my fear is too great- should my craft sink and i be off course surely i will perish alone so i remain trapped in a convoy of vessels making no waves of my own perhaps someday i will find the courage to forge the course known only by my heart -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I like this one, Vicky, and I'm glad to see you posting here. That is quite a scary proposition, striking out in your own direction. If you manage to do it, let me know how it turns out, will you? To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Vicky; Do the only thing that will give you utter joy and peace....Follow your heart always. love, Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Vicky, I takes courage to follow our hearts lead against reason and leave that which is comfortable or familiar. Good poem! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
You said this was old? Well, in this case, it's an ancient treasure.  Beautiful, beautiful poem, reminds me a lot of a song on the Titanic soundtrack, "Hymn to the Sea"...you should listen to it, it would fit your poem perfectly...even though it doesn't need any more improvement!  Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
a lovely oldie but goodie, Vicky..I identify with this closely as I have always been somewhat of a loner. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Oh, my ... I REALLY like this. 'so i remain trapped in a convoy of vessels making no waves of my own' Well, Matey ... you're sure making some poetic waves here. Enjoyed it and surely do enjoy you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marilyn- LOL...yes...if i figure it out, you'll be the first to know.. thanks for the kind words. hugs to you. ellie- thank you, my friend. i will do my best. Dennis- right you are...it can be very scary. thanks for reading... glad you enjoyed. spyro- ***big smiles***...so good to hear from my guardian dragon...i've missed you. i'll have to look for that song... thank for 'ancient treasure'...you just made my nite... big hugs to you, my friend. pegasus- thanks so much for the kind reply. really glad you enjoyed it. Marge- how do you do it?? you always make my day with you replies. thanks for the enthusiasm... really glad you enjoyed... big smiles on this face. love and hugs to you thanks all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
not directly relevant but this made me think of something i have read "There is no point in planning for tomorrow for we never know what tomorrow will bring"..... perhaps we avoid planning because we are reluctant to follow our heart as this poem suggets... i liked the sentiments here and am glad you posted this oldie |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
true and wise..........the heart is a hard task master .........sometimes. Nice Vicky Jon |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
I am so glad you decided to post this gem...I love it. To sail alone on a sea of dreams To a distant shore all my own. How beautiful! Best |
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