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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
While walking down a leaf strwen path I chanced to meet the Winter Fae her form was clean and pure and bright as snowdrifts i nthe full moon's light A gentle kiss upon my cheek and then it was I heard her speak "Good day, youngsoul, you solstice-born how fare you now before First Storm?" The storm she mentioned had yet to come on alaskan winds bereft of sun as they did one longest night whereby was born my soul of light 'I am well' I said" but pleased tis true to see and feel the sight of You. for though the sun is fair and bright, I was born on solstice night.' "I know" she said "for I was there I saw your mother's burden bared I heard the night touched by your cry and saw Aurora in your eyes" "Ever have I watched you so the seasons pass as on you grow a manly gift from God above yet wonder I, if made for love?" Her question last waslike a sigh my mind did race and in her eye found I a warm and beating soul yet mortal, I knew not her goal 'Would you love a soul like me?' quite shocked, embaressed plain to see and with her touch she stilled my heart and did her lips with warm words part "I love you my sweet solstice-born I hear your passion in the storm I ache for you the summer long and pray one day to share your song" Now taking her in gentle hand I left the path, the wood, this land eternal love with her I'll stay sharing songs with Winter Fae |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
my apologies for the obvious self appreciation *L* ...just had an idea...it turned into this  Sol |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
more apologies...for mispelling "strewn" Sol:P |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
LOL Well, whether or not 'tis with misspellings strewn, it is a lovely tale, and who better to tell it than the hero? I really enjoyed this, Sol! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Sol, tis a magnificent Fae tale, written with Fae dust and fae magic! Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is a teriffic piece, Sol..tight and flowing..I love it.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very well written, Solstice Son! Beautifully done! Denise |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
yep you definatly have a way with words, loved this Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
oh my....* just blushes all to pieces* Sol |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Sol.... Great Job!!! no blushing allowed....lol Best |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a charming story, thank you for sharing... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Very delightful Sol.......a tale for the season. Jon |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Sir Solstice... liked the feeling on this one. The storm she mentioned had yet to come on alaskan winds bereft of sun as they did one longest night whereby was born my soul of light 'I am well' I said" but pleased tis true to see and feel the sight of You. for though the sun is fair and bright, I was born on solstice night.' "I know" she said "for I was there I saw your mother's burden bared I heard the night touched by your cry and saw Aurora in your eyes" Thought these three stanzas were some of the best. Keep 'em coming. Peace! |
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