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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME 
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Mixed Emotions I don't want to want you the way that I want you. I don't want to love you as much as I do. I don't want to need you, but I really need to. My only comfort is you need me, too. In love with you, babe, is not how I should be. My head is saying that we ought to part, But I can't do it. Oh baby, you must see My head is subject to my heart. Hundreds of thoughts and feelings are swirling. If I were wise, I know I would run, But I remember how you set met twirling, Dancing with breeze and face to the sun. To have your heart from another is stealing. To give you mine I know is a sin. I just can't see how to get past this feeling, So I keep fighting a fight I can't win. Still, I believe there is hope for tomorrow, That we will be with each other some day, And, though I know it might bring me to sorrow, I love, want and need you in every way. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KCS~ This has the lilt of a song to it ! Nice job on it. Sad ... but that's the way with some songs of the heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Sometimes the heart is a wicked thing......it tortures the soul....what to do? Jon |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
the forbidden fruit..ageless, timeless, mesmerizing.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Marge - That is exactly how I heard this in my head, as a country song - odd, since I am a classical musician. This was an answer to a challenge from a friend, and it's just how it came out. Jon - The heart can be a difficult organ to deal with, but we romantics just have to follow our hearts, don't we? pegasus - You are exactly right. Nothing is so attractive as what we are not supposed to have, is it? Thanks to all of you for reading and replying. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sad but nonetheless a great read.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Thanks, Dopey. Yes, sad, but always hopeful. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
kcsgrandmother, this is heart-wrenching and the first stanza just kind of tears my heart apart Good stuff...i only hope this isnt autobiographical  [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 11-18-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marilyn- wow...how have i missed this one until now...glad i found it. i can relate to much of the feeling and emotion in this one. hits very deeply. i like it lots. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Kaile - Thanks. I suppose much of we write is partly autobiographical, but this also was written as an answer to a challenge, and things came out a bit more mixed than they really are. Actually, this was written in the laundromat, and they tend to play country music.. maybe influenced me a bit. Vicky - I'm glad you found it, too, but hope you don't relate too much! Your comments always mean a lot to me. Thanks, and hugs To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I also cant believe this one escaped me for so long. Great write which unforunately I can relate to somewhat. Dawn |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Thank you, Dawn. Mixed emotions are not easy. Hope you sort yours out. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmm..i thought i replied to this once..it seems i didnt..but i love it..i know exactly where youre coming from..... *sigh*..that first stanza, especially, echoes my own heart.... this is a good one mar.... hugs, gale "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Thanks, gale. Maybe sometimes we just have to go with the feelings, eh? hug To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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