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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Lover's Melody ~*Marge Tindal*~ I'll meet you in the glen, when sunset has turned out the light We'll share the fireflies together as they twinkle in the night Where lovers have no questions words, no need to be said I'll meet you in the glen, where we will make our bed Our bodies speak with passion of one another to behold A story without words waiting to be told I will hold on to you like the clinging of the vine with our love's passion flowering our bodies entwined The only sounds heard like a soft melody The rhythm of desire playing within you and me You take me to the peak within my song you dwell I am ready for the singing for you know this melody well Over and over you sing me then once more with feeling You send me soaring to the heights sending my spirits reeling With crescendo from the master you pause and then you fall I am here to catch you My love, my love, my all ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Wow Marge (and I don't wow easily)that is some passion......its lovely to share your song with a heart so true...this is rather beautiful...love it! Jon |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This certainly deserves a wow Marge, and much more! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
oooo, Marge,The passion and deep romantic love is so vibrant and real. I love this. I need to say "WOW"! too. Love, Ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The only sounds heard like a soft melody The rhythm of desire playing within you and me very warm and inviting, Marge... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jon~ I am most pleased that you found it to your liking. Thank you for letting me know. EagleOne~ Thank you so much, sweet poet. I'm so glad you liked it. Ellie~ I think I like these WOW's ! Really tickled that you enjoyed it. Wynter~ I'm glad that you found it pleasing. Thanks so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
"A story without words waiting to be told" I loved the entire poem Marge, it has so much feeling! I really like the line above, it rings so true to me! Very nice! |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Marge..this is exquisite..loved it..more!! the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Debbie~ Thank you so much - glad you could relate. Pegasus~ Thank you. I'll see what I can come up with !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marge, This so sensual and tender, loves sweet song shared by two lovers on a perfect night! May I add my WOW? Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Marge, I dislike echoing everyone else, but in this case I have no choice, this poem deserves a major Wow! I loved it, and as I finished reading it Wow!, is what came out of my mouth. Thanks for sharing this wonderfully passionate poem here with us. |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
.... HOO WAH!! ..Not a romantic term certainly...but I do strive for originality at all times...I work outside..today was cold..the poem...better than a campfire to warm my freezing soul... thanks for sharin m'dear... Sol |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- yep...WOW is definitely the word!! beautiful, my friend...so much love and passion pouring from your pen lately...i'm loving it! love ya, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Thank you for sharing such sweet comments. LostDreamer~ Thank you so very much. I reckon the WOW's have it ! Soltice~ Tee-Hee ... I'm so glad you found warmth in my thoughts. Come sit at the hearth of a friend. Vicky~ Well - I'm just WOW'd at the response to this little chunk of my heart. Thank you, precious friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
WOW!! Spectacular!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you for the reply, sweet lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
its truely a melody and I have to say WOW too Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
I will hold on to you like the clinging of the vine with our love's passion flowering our bodies entwined Marge, my eyes lit up at this stanza, Really beautiful..... hmmmm....WOW |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maria~ Thank you so much for letting me know. Kaile~ I appreciate your comments. Glad to spread a little glow. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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