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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Twilight Caught between conscious and unconscious, Resisting wakefulness, unable to sleep, Thinking of you in meaningless phrases, Dreaming without images, I am Lost in the nether world of twilight sleep. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KCS~ Yes ... I know just what you mean. Me too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marilyn- oh yes! how i can relate to this. been there...am there. love it. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This is a good snapshot of my mind ...ALL the time......Phew am I awake yet? Jon |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Oh!!DO I know this one, especially lately ... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
It seems you've captured all of our conditions..very nice..well said. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
My, we are a sleepy bunch today! Too many late nights at the computer? Thanks all for the comments. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*squints his eyes and looks at your groggily* Eh?! Sleepy? Not I! Wonderful poem, a great read. "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Thanks, Dopey. Better get to sleep soon. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
oooh...very nicely done...Rod Serling would be proud..Kudos Sol |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
LOL Thanks Sol! I hadn't thought of Rod Serling. Puts a new slant on the twilight sleep experience. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Thinking of you in meaningless phrases, Dreaming without images, I am yes! i'm there! *sigh* seems we're all spending quality time with our computers these days...LOL great little ditty mar.. hugs,dg "i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..." |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Well, dg, we're obviously in good company. Yes, this might indeed have something to do with late nights chatting. Can't seem to quit, though, can you? To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
a perfect way to decribe this feeling I'm there right now Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Thanks, Maria. Glad you woke up enough to stop in. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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