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WEEBEE3
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since 2000-09-28
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0 posted 2000-11-01 07:07 PM


There is a certain joy
seeing delight in friends eye
as you approach them
Laughter shared amoung true friends
One of life's cherished moments!

To be so attuned
to care as if for one's self
to lovingly act
allowing weakness and strength
such friendship is cherished much.

Like a summers breeze
that gently blows through my heart,
so does your friendship
whisper warm encouragements
that blossom me in fullnes.


[This message has been edited by WEEBEE3 (edited 11-01-2000).]

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Moon Dust
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1 posted 2000-11-01 07:09 PM


And beauifully thought out too

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
2 posted 2000-11-01 08:48 PM


This is very nice....

Best


Jon Mewett
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3 posted 2000-11-02 04:42 AM


Yep friendship is special......very nice.

Jon

BSC
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4 posted 2000-11-02 05:06 PM


Oh WEEBEE ~ Such wonderful thoughts of beautiful friendships...How lucky the person who has such a friend.  Bonnie
Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
5 posted 2000-11-03 06:48 PM


WEEEBEEE3,
  How did I miss this one, it is wonderful!!
It is a joy when those around us are happy (even if it's at our expense, as you said).  Wonderful tanka's and blessed are we to recognize these friends.   Just lovely,  Marcy

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
6 posted 2000-11-04 06:01 PM


This is really good, I love the thoughts

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-11-05 04:06 AM


WeeBee~

'Like a summers breeze
that gently blows through my heart,
so does your friendship
whisper warm encouragements
that blossom me in fullnes.'


Very, very nice thoughts presented in your Tanka's.
~*Marge*~





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DawnG
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8 posted 2000-11-05 05:02 PM


Just wonderful. I'm so happy to be able to say after 25 yrs I've finally found friends like the ones described in your works   I love you guys  


                           Dawn

Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
9 posted 2000-11-06 02:41 PM


You did such a great job on this tanka, your choice of words really shine!  A very thoughtful message on the value of a good friend!
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