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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2000-10-30 10:15 PM


* This has been moved to the Adult forum due to its content. Please email me if you have any questions, Wynter Bliss. Those who have access to Adult may reply to this poem in that forum *

Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 11-04-2000).]

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Ron K. Fox
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1 posted 2000-10-30 10:43 PM


hmmm a little warm in here...lovely images you paint...I'll say it again...you're the warmest wynter I've ever known. Whew (wiping my forehead)seriously...Beautiful poem.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Christopher
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2 posted 2000-10-31 12:31 PM


gulp - sigh - I know "too many months..." the ending tho - wow - well executed and a twist on the title I didn't expect!

Brava!

Christopher

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2000-10-31 07:19 AM


Ron-
you are making me laugh    I love the feeling of warmth and returning it...I kiss the "Whew" from your forehead...seriously I thank you  

with
~Wynter's Bliss


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II


nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2000-10-31 07:24 AM


Christopher-

A gulp and a sigh?
Oh my! Oh my!...
and a twist at the end?
Words delight me, my friend.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II


Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
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5 posted 2000-10-31 04:53 PM


excellent! A stirring bit of passion..to chase the chill of autumn from my body..thank you....I needed a nice bit of warmth to wrap round my soul...thank you...

Sol

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2000-11-01 06:49 AM


Sol-
thank you for the warm reply, I will wrap that around my thoughts for today and leave you with a  

~Wynter Bliss


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II


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