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Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

0 posted 2000-10-25 09:11 PM

Thanks dgvarner...you made me think of something.

I feel so nothing.
Just an empty screen.
Blank.
Unemotional.
Lost.
Without words.
White on White.
Void of color,
Ink,Scribbles.
Ah, yes a scribble.
Something forming,
Little doodles,
Working in the back of my mind.
Coming together,
Words.
Words.
Words escape me.
Delete.

[This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 10-26-2000).]

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2000-10-26 11:13 AM

DELETED!!!!?? jeez...i finally get a chance to stop in and read a ron poem..and the one i stop in for is actually deleted...not just titled "deleted"! LOL

bummer.....

hugs, dg

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-10-26 01:48 PM

You'd be surprised to learn that sometimes even the best of the poets here get to page 2 or even 3 before a reply is given...patience, Sir, patience!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

3 posted 2000-10-26 01:56 PM

Thanks sunshine...I really wasn't pleased with the first one...Ron

kid D
Member

since 2000-10-18

Posts 64

4 posted 2000-10-26 02:29 PM

i like this....lol you just described me...only today i would be black on black instead....
i have started so many poems this week and hit delete instead of finishing them...great writing

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

5 posted 2000-10-26 05:29 PM

thanks kid...I originally had a different one here...didnt get a response...plus I didnt like it...so i deleted it...then I got a response or two...saying "where's the poem delete?...so I wrote one. funny how something can inspire you huh? ron

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

6 posted 2000-10-26 06:59 PM

Well, I missed the first one, but am glad you found the inspiration.

Enjoyed this.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

7 posted 2000-10-26 10:52 PM

getting back to the poem...I can relate. good thought train and to pen nothing, express nothing..puurrrtty good.

Marcy

ps: looks like a Ron deleted poem for dg, passed this over thinking it a closed thread.

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

8 posted 2000-10-27 06:50 AM

Delete, delete, delete.
Doesn't anybody erase, anymore.
Hey, great poem.
Melton

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

9 posted 2000-10-27 09:46 AM

ah yes...have felt this way... glad you put something back in here!

..just sorry i missed the first one..

i have a poem on this subject..somewhere...i'm gonna look for it just for you

hugs, dg

"after a while, you learn the subtle difference between holding a hand and chaining a soul..." -V A Shoffstall

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