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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2000-10-25 01:23 AM


This is my attempt to name the Corner Pub when it first opened. Reposted by request.  


Deep in the tranquil forest green
Lies the shell of the Quill and Rose
A pub known here for a hundred years
With a story everyone knows

The owner built his business
For his son, Robert LeBlayne
For twenty years he sold his brews
Saved all coins that he did gain

When Robert’s youth was over
His father bade him take the reins
But Robert’s heart was stolen
By the wind that caress the plains

Poor Robert said he had a poet’s soul
Claimed verse was his heart’s desire
His father, raged and in his anger
Threatened retribution dire

Robert’s sister, Gwendolyn
Begged for the pub as her own
So Robert left the forest glen
His inheritance he’d disown

Years passed gently for Gwendolyn
She wed and bore a brood
Her husband nightly drank his fill
As Gwendolyn earned their food

Her son, a hearty laughing lad
Took charge of the pub when she died
Under his cheerful direction
Gold coin was plentifully supplied

One rainy night in the forest dark
A knock was heard at the door
A gnarled old man, a wanderer.
Sought shelter from the downpour

He drank and ate, and talked a bit
Weaving tales of magic places afar
And that night the cheery barkeep
Let him sleep behind the bar

Morning dawned fair and dry
In the forest in the glen
The old man lay behind the bar
Never to roam again

The barkeep found a diary
Verses and stories told the tale
Of young Robert LeBlayne
Who chose verse over ale

They buried him next to Gwendolyn
And made a book of his verse and prose
And to this day, you can read it here
The book titled “The Quill and Rose”


© Copyright 2000 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
StarGlow
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since 2000-10-23
Posts 40

1 posted 2000-10-25 01:47 AM


Poet, I love the tale, loved it!! I also like the name "Quill and Rose". Wonderful story, easy read and original.  Liked lots.
Star

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 2000-10-25 04:53 PM


I remember this well my friend - still, your heart, caring and imagination amaze me at every turn.

Hugs

C

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2000-10-25 06:19 PM


a great tale, my friend..well done

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-10-25 07:20 PM


What a marvelous yarn you've spun. I love it!
We all should rename the pub, "The Quill and the Rose", it's such a perfect name, and this poem is so beautiful and hauntingly lovely. Love, ellie

le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of..



kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
5 posted 2000-10-25 11:57 PM


'Tis a pretty name and a pretty tale.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
6 posted 2000-10-26 11:25 AM


What a wonderful story you weave of following your heart's desire.
look forward to more.

Best

kid D
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since 2000-10-18
Posts 64

7 posted 2000-10-26 05:11 PM


well....i too have chosen verse over ale, i hope that doesn't mean i will die in my sleep behind a bar *g*....no really i love this, i wish i could write like this, this is quality writing with flair and style...
a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
8 posted 2000-10-26 05:50 PM


Wow...this is...really great, DeVine. There is something in thispoem that I cannot grasp, but it manages to mix two opposite emotions and to weave it out into this poem.  
--Little Girl


[This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 10-26-2000).]

Denise
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9 posted 2000-10-26 08:54 PM


Thanks for reposting this, Sharon! It's one of my favorites!

Denise

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
10 posted 2000-10-26 10:15 PM


This is a keeper, a good 'en      Marcy
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