The Corner Pub |
![]() ![]() |
Rocky Ledge Of Reality |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Rocky Ledge Of Reality Sitting upon this course rocky ledge of reality where the fluttering birds of paradise quietly soar, as if the boundaries of the vast hemisphere are limitless. Wondering if flowing arms out stretched could capture distant unity within a small fraction of a second of imaginations eye. Where would one soar on fluttering wings of limitless boundaries that reach the distant beauty of sightly imagination? Can I peacefully venture from this rocky ledge of reality into my own sightly imagination of boundaries distant unity, and still find myself quietly sitting contemplating the limitless hemisphere that openly sits before me? |
||
© Copyright 2000 Nurse Crachet - All Rights Reserved | |||
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow...excellent imagery! I like this.. Your poetry always makes me think.... thank you. |
||
Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Well, it makes me think too... (sometimes I lose sleep over it! lol ![]() ![]() Little Spyro T. Dragon |
||
Beverly Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123New Mexico |
I am always in awe of poems written in free verse. Thank you for this one it is an excellent piece of work! Keep posting! |
||
Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Excellent free verse. Enjoyed this great piece of art. |
||
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! This is so beautiful!! ![]() Denise |
||
Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
I thank you all so very much I am amazed how much praise you all gave this one. Somehow I did not feel this to be on a scale of praise in my mind it was so, so. With that it warmed my heart to know I captured your minds within a poem I was not so sure of. Once again thanks a million. |
||
Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Nurse Crachet, what a great poem. I do hope however, this doesn't mean you're about to jump....you'd be missed at the 'Stute ! Did you know there's a new Nurse trying to take your place ? |
||
Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Munda, Thank you, and no jumping here, I've taken the long road back to the Stute. New nurse taking my place, I'll see about that. |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |