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Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

0 posted 2000-10-15 12:34 PM


I wrote this for my father, he was recently diagnosed with throat cancer and had his vocal cords removed.

Dad,
You’ve always used the fewest words
to speak so much to me,
and now that you have lost your voice,
I hope that you will see,

It was never how you sounded,
it was what you had to say,
words selected carefully,
could brighten up my day.

I’ve always known you loved me,
it isn’t what you said,
the love and pride shines in your eyes,
you tell me there instead.

Don’t worry dad, I understand
the words you’d like to say,
it’s not too late for us to talk
a new and different way.

We both have said some things,
that were better left unspoken,
two voices struck uneven cords,
and left our spirits broken.

Lets talk without our voices now,
it really doesn’t matter
it’s how we sound inside that counts,
not useless words we chatter.

In eyes and touch, in thoughts and prayers,
your message will convey,
everything you’ve wished you said,
or ever hoped to say.


© Copyright 2000 Deborah L. Carter - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2000-10-15 01:06 AM


This is well said, Debbie.  I hope your father has seen it.  He must be very proud of you.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
2 posted 2000-10-15 07:57 AM


Debbie,
Very nicely written. It's not just sound that people can hear. It is the voice in your eyes, as well.
Thank you for these words.
Melton

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-10-15 08:00 AM


Debbie; I'm so sorry that your Dad had to go through this terrible experience, but your words here are so perfect, everything that's important is said with the heart and can be seen in the eyes. You are a wonderful daughter and your Dad is so very proud, I'm sure. Love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
4 posted 2000-10-15 10:27 AM


Debbie,
  This is a touching reminder that our words are not as important as the content of our heart. You Father is blest to have as understanding and caring daughter as you. God bless you both.
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-10-15 11:58 AM


This is so touching and from the heart that it brought tears to my eyes. Very lovely, Debbie!

Denise

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since 1999-06-11
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Skelmersdale, UK
6 posted 2000-10-15 01:32 PM


Yeah it is very beauiful

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
7 posted 2000-10-15 01:33 PM


Thanks everybody for your comments,

My dad is doing just great with his new voice box! He's a real trouper!  


Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-10-15 10:06 PM


Debbie~
Verse brimming with love and hope.
What a wonderful gift for your dad.
Glad to hear that he's doing well.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

9 posted 2000-10-16 06:14 AM


Heart warming and Beautiful..........

Jon

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
10 posted 2000-10-16 07:31 AM


Tis is beautiful.. I hope your dad seen it!!  Wow.  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

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