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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
I know a little daisy as sweet as she can be she spends her days out in the sun a swayin in the breeze but when the Sun gets sleepy and its the end of day she closes up her daisy eyes and dreams the night away she dreams she's in a garden with lots of butterflies the butterflies are handsome and she catches every eye but the one that she loves most is the chubby honeybee and she sings out as she giggles " Oh my hunny's sweet on meeee " the Honeybee is charming in all he says and does and every time he smooches her he gives a little buzz and she giggles and she wiggles for her heart is full of glee and she sings out as she giggles " Oh my hunny's sweet on meeeeeee !! " |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is precious! Absolutely delightful! Denise |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Thank you Denise...little Rhi was a character from my role play days...daughter to the chracter I played, Silas MacCord, their story is too long to tell here...but while waiting for my rp partner I came up with this...still makes me smile... but again...thanks  Sol |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I love this! If RP inspires this sort of thing, maybe I won't complain about my daughter's doing it so much. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Soltice~ I love it ... just precious. Melodically done with such adorable levity. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Solstice Sam, What a delightful, imaginative tale. I liked this a lot! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Oh my... Thanks everyone.....truely.... She had more songs..(( I had to wait often for my rp partner *L* )) now if I can only remember them *L* ALWAYS WRITE STUFF DOWN!! *L* Sol |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
This is just adorable....i love it!! Great job! Best |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Sol, this was way too cute!!  I love it!With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Thank you BWAngel...BestGirl I had a blast at he time I first wrote it..glad it still works for a few Sol |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This is so much fun to read! I found myself almost singing it as I read along! Great Job, I think it would be the cutest childrens book! |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Thanks Debbie, in all truth it is a song, I worked on the piano afterI wrote the words just to find a easier way to recall the words.*L* glad you liked it Sol |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Really cute and a pleasure to read outloud. -Lady |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Thank you Lady Noggins I finally recalled some others *L* I must be getting old, cuz it took me long enough Sol |
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