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Beyond That Path...inspired by Temptress |
MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Beyond That Path Lonely days, complete with empty, mind travels a distance in thought. Memories rise, bringing light to these eyes to a path by a stream, once was brought. Hand in hand, tightening of hold, leading the way tenderly. Pulled tight to hips, With lips gracing lips in a picture of pure harmony. In that moment, ever sealed memory, indelible in heart. Words cannot erase the smile from this face, in recall, of each kiss you impart. Or a touch of the gentleness, that arresting look, within eyes. As you lean into me I gaze your blue sea, pure silence, except for the sighs. Beyond that path was light of the moon. It's magic, I held in my grasp. Now the swaying of trees from the gentlest breeze has released you, and love from my clasp. M 10*13*2k [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 10-13-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beauitfully done, Maureen! You are a talented writer! Denise |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Denise...I just write what I am feeling within my own heart...at the moment. ~~softsmiles Maureen |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WOW! This was beautifully done. What a feeling, eh? That love you knew you had and once in a while gazing back on it with peace and fondness? Yes..This was awesome. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Silly ole computer... [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 10-13-2000).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Very pretty, Maureen, but also sad. Still, the happiness of being in love is worth the risk you might have to let go. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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