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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-10-13 09:18 PM




Beyond That Path

Lonely days, complete with empty,
mind travels a distance in thought.
Memories rise,
bringing light to these eyes
to a path by a stream, once was brought.

Hand in hand, tightening of hold,
leading the way tenderly.
Pulled tight to hips,
With lips gracing lips
in a picture of pure harmony.

In that moment, ever sealed
memory, indelible in heart.
Words cannot erase
the smile from this face,
in recall, of each kiss you impart.

Or a touch of the gentleness,
that arresting look, within eyes.
As you lean into me
I gaze your blue sea,
pure silence, except for the sighs.

Beyond that path was light of the moon.
It's magic, I held in my grasp.
Now the swaying of trees
from the gentlest breeze
has released you, and love from my clasp.

M
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[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 10-13-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-10-13 09:28 PM


Very beauitfully done, Maureen! You are a talented writer!

Denise

MMoonchild
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2 posted 2000-10-13 09:37 PM


thank you Denise...I just write what I am feeling within my own heart...at the moment.
~~softsmiles
Maureen

Temptress
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3 posted 2000-10-13 10:32 PM


WOW!   This was beautifully done. What a feeling, eh? That love you knew you had and once in a while gazing back on it with peace and fondness?  Yes..This was awesome.  
Temptress
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4 posted 2000-10-13 10:32 PM


Silly ole computer...  

[This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 10-13-2000).]

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
5 posted 2000-10-13 11:04 PM


Very pretty, Maureen, but also sad.  Still, the happiness of being in love is worth the risk you might have to let go.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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