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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2000-10-11 05:38 PM


Hazy, cool fall days
The sun steals a summers Deam
Autumn sleeps awhile


Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-10-11 07:38 PM


Ellie~
Very pretty.
The nicest thing about Fall
is that Winter isn't here !
~*Marge*~


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2dalimit
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2 posted 2000-10-11 08:51 PM


Cool thought. Fall has finally arrived in Texas.
Melton

vlraynes
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3 posted 2000-10-11 08:56 PM



ellie-
very nice.  
i like this alot.

love ya,
    -vicky

marge...lol...you certainly are
anti-winter aren't you...



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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4 posted 2000-10-12 10:55 AM


Ellie,
  Another delightful autumn haiku, WAY TO GO!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



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5 posted 2000-10-12 04:18 PM


I like this one

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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