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Indian Summer - Haiku

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-10-11 05:38 PM

Hazy, cool fall days
The sun steals a summers Deam
Autumn sleeps awhile

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-10-11 07:38 PM

Ellie~
Very pretty.
The nicest thing about Fall
is that Winter isn't here !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

2 posted 2000-10-11 08:51 PM

Cool thought. Fall has finally arrived in Texas.
Melton

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2000-10-11 08:56 PM

ellie-
very nice.
i like this alot.

love ya,
-vicky

marge...lol...you certainly are
anti-winter aren't you...

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

4 posted 2000-10-12 10:55 AM

Ellie,
Another delightful autumn haiku, WAY TO GO!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2000-10-12 04:18 PM

I like this one

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.

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