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Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
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Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-10-04 06:46 PM



I can feel you when you weep
Though we are so far apart
You gave me your heart and soul to keep

I sense you right here with me
Standing close by my side
Giving me the strength to be

Soon Ill feel your warmth again
As I wrap you in my arms
And never let you go again

Keith W. Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


© Copyright 2000 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
Lady Lost
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1 posted 2000-10-04 08:02 PM


This is so beautiful (as the tear falls) ~you are quite the romantic~
how lucky she must feel................beth

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
2 posted 2000-10-05 12:38 PM


I like this.  You captured a very special feeling here.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-10-05 04:24 AM


Alovely sentiment expressed well .........

Jon

MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-10-05 05:43 AM


I can feel you when you weep

I have had someone tell me that before...you write very tender lines, Keith
~~soft smiles
Maureen

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5 posted 2000-10-05 06:35 PM


nice

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
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Forest Lake, MN, USA
6 posted 2000-10-09 12:44 PM


Thank you all for your kind replys to my poem.

Keith W. Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2000-10-09 06:20 PM


very sweet and tender...

must be a very special someone  

hugs, dg


she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without
-clint black

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