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Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-10-03 10:50 PM


I was shipwrecked before I got aboard.
Floundering with indecision and thoughts of discord.
Turbulance created waves of sorrow
Til you offered assistance, your strength I borrowed,
Filling my spirit with calm~ my heart soared.
I was shipwrecked before I got aboard.

***

*Solstice Son's "shipwreck" poem inspired me to dig this one out of the archives  


...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture



© Copyright 2000 Dorene M. Harris - All Rights Reserved
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-10-04 07:16 AM


Shipwrecked no more though.........brilliant.

Jon

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
2 posted 2000-10-04 09:24 AM


Kind of you Jon. Thank you  

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture



BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
3 posted 2000-10-05 09:51 AM


Great write!

Deb  

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
4 posted 2000-10-05 10:23 AM


BloomingRose. . . Thank you !  

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture



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