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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
She drifts like the water In her old blue dress She ripples on the shores Of her own distress She feels with a thousand pounds of empathy She deals with much more than Simple sympathy Her eyes elegantly gaze across the room Soft whites and blues See more than you assume Her last escape from all All that those eyes see She doesn't touch the floor Away from pain and misery Many eyes now tear for her To mourn is the only feeling When lifes real angel Floats down from the ceiling |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Nice Bob.........kinda sad feel to it 'She feels with a thousand pounds of empathy She deals with much more than Simple sympathy' Love this Bob Jon |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Hmm.. This gave me chills.. Very well done.  With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Very well written, many times we never know all there is to a person till it's too late. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow wob...yeah..i'm gonna have to ditto what lost dreamer said..very true.. and this one does indeed bring a chill.. well written.. hugs, dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I love this... the flow, the tone it's wonderfully done. Thanks for the read  K |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thank you all for reading and responding to this one. I have a rewrite of it somewhere because I didn't particularly care for the last stanza all that much. Again, many thanks for reading it. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
This was very nice. It brought back memories of my mother. Thanks Melton |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Temptress, Thanks so much for reading and replying!!! Glad you liked it! Melton--->Thank you for reading aswell, I'm glad to have envoked memories for you, that is trully worthwhile. ThankYOU very much. |
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