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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
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Your lips on mine, kissing softly I open my eyes, you are not there Only at night, when I am fast asleep I feel you again, touching my hair Are you a ghost, or just a dream Closing my eyes, I feel your stare Drifting to sleep , is it all in my mind Alone in my bed, touch if you dare Tossing and turning, thinking of you My eyes are closed, but you are not there Falling asleep, I feel your breath on my cheek Reaching out for you, it is just thin air Again tonight, thinking of you Again tonight, my lips, I share Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul. Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a beautiful expression, Victoria! Denise |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Beautiful, but it makes me lonely. *sigh* |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I can feel the yearning in this poem.......it's very strong and beautifuly put........some people we just can't do without.....their presence will always be there. Nice Victoria jon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you for reading Denise,Kcs and Jon, nice to hear from you, i really do appreciate your kind words..  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Victoria~ I relate very much to the longing in this poem. Well expressed! Sometimes it is only in dreams where your fantasies awaken Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Actually Melissa..I wrote this over three years ago for someone special..alot younger then myself..and i mean alottttt younger haa..  thank you for reading |
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