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The Music Of His Heart |
Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Sshh! Lets not wake grandma he whispers, and we walk in bare feet, to the kitchen. coffee chugs in the worn percolator, and his "mush" warms in the oven. Sitting at the table, we watch out the window for the red woodpecker, or sometimes its a Robin or a sparrow and once a hawk, soaring gracefully in the sky. The radio is playing Duke Ellington , "It Don’t Mean A Thing If It Ain’t Got That Swing!" "Now that was music!" he says. He tells me again, about the wonderful dance halls, the Plantation, The Savoy Club Count Basie, Glenn Miller Swinging away til dawn He wore "zoot suits" and oxford baggies, so stiff, they could almost stand up by themselves. Black and white shoes, button-end suspenders, a wide-brimmed hat. "Franny and I could jitterbug or Lindy hop with the best of them" he says of my grandmother, who is still sleeping peacefully, and cannot defend her dignified image. I try to imagine him strong and agile, lifting her high into the air, then sliding her between his legs on the crowded dance floor, whirling her around and around, swinging to the big band, young and invincible, so unbelievable, that it makes me giggle. I don’t know at this moment, while I sip cocoa and drink in his words, that someday, as he reaches for his coffee cup he’ll fall to the floor, and lay for a while, alone amid the broken glass. I don’t know at this moment, that his blue eyes, still young behind his glasses, will finally close as the sounds of Tommy Dorsey and Benny Goodman the music of his heart, play softly on the radio. I only know this cozy morning in this pleasant room, his gentle face of love, and then he bends low and grand, "Care to dance?" and I stand on his feet, and reach for his fragile hands, pungent with the scent of tobacco, and old spice, My cheek pressed against the knees of his soft pajamas, as we dance around the room, a strong, powerful hawk glides somewhere outside the window, and the radio softly plays, "I’ll See You In My Dreams". [This message has been edited by Debbie (edited 09-22-2000).] |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
I don't quite know where to begin a reply on this...I'm inspired, so much so that I feel the well of tears building. Age and agelessness, this was simply beautiful. Thank you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Debbie. This brought tears to my eyes. Very touching. This is a wonderful tribute to your grandfather. Denise |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Thanks to you both for your kind replies! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Debbie; How gifted you are! I love reading your poetry. This is one of your best ever, This incredibly loving, nostalgic tribute to your grandfather is a work of poetic art. Magnificent! Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Debbie~ Probably one of the softest touching renders I've read for a while. How wonderfully you have drawn the image of your grandfather. This is just about perfect in my book. Thank you for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Debbie, You have certainly tugged the heartstrings with this sweet memory of times gone by. This is simply beautiful. Bonnie |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Hello Debbie, This took me a step back into time, like I was right there witnessing the scene. So enjoyed ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
To Ellie, Bonnie, Marge and Chanson, Thank-you so much for your wonderful comments on my poem! I was listening to some jazz the other day and it reminded me off my grandfather. I wanted to try and share my feelings about him in a poem, something to remember him by. I'll never forget those wonderful mornings the two of us shared in his kitchen when I was a child! Your kind remarks made my efforts so worthwhile....Thank-you! |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
debbie darlin, my own grampa..was less than pleasant..he was mean and creul to all he should have been most caringto....thank you for sharing this one...now i have a good picture to think on...for all the hard times when a grampa would have been nice to have around... |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Solstice son, I'm sorry to hear that your own experience was unpleasant. Maybe you will use that experience to your advantage someday if you become a grandparent yourself! It's so easy to please a little child isn't it? |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
This reminded me of graham crackers and milk with my gramps....Thanks for the wonderful stroll down memory lane.... Best |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is amazing. I really don't know what else to say, except for, good job!! --Little Girl |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Thanks best and little girls for your thoughtful replies, I'm happy you enjoyed my poem! |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Debbie, I'm sort of speechless... This is so....touching.. It reminded me of the days when I used to sit and have tea with my Grandma and watch the sun come up... And it made me cry.. Happy tears, but sad too, cause she's not around anymore... Very excellently written.. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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