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0 posted 2000-09-21 04:57 PM



Footprints washed away
by tides carrying a chill
as summers warmth ebbs

© Copyright 2000 Bonnie Church - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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1 posted 2000-09-21 07:19 PM


Yeah!
Summer's almost gone
winter's commin on

Denise
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2 posted 2000-09-21 08:45 PM


My favorite time of year at the beach!! Very good, Bonnie!

Denise

Jon Mewett
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3 posted 2000-09-22 04:25 AM


There certainly is more room on the beach that's for sure....nicely written Bonnie.

Jon

ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2000-09-22 06:56 PM


waves of winters chill
wash away summers warm sands
Tides of fall arrive

I loved your Haiku, and I love the beach in summer, hate to see it end! Great writing, Bonnie, as usual! Love, Ellie

Honeybee
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5 posted 2000-09-22 07:22 PM



I absolutely love this haiku...so well written!  I am ready for autumn to arrive, this summer in Canada was humid!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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Alle'cram
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6 posted 2000-09-22 07:48 PM


So, so true. Your in walking distance, huh?  I know you have a dock & special place near water.  Good job writing.  marcy
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