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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Under the leaf blanket, Lies First leaves of purest gold, The beauty of fall. Words flow heavily, A carbon copy of my heart, As well as my soul. |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Maria, you've described the season well with this little gem. Bonnie |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, a creative haiku, perhaps your best, I love the images in this, you captured autumn so well  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice maria  hugs, dg "i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
awww thanks all There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, Beautiful autumn picture! (Suggestion: In the first line , lose the word "the", it's quite unecessary) Your Haikus are delightful! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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