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The Call of Autumn.......Love Goes On
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
The yellow tinge invades the green The spidery web is made unseen The evening sun recedes from view I take a breath and think of you Our spring was fresh with life’s sweet prayer With lovers dreams draped through your hair With daisy chains entangled gold With eternal beats our hearts would hold My perfect friend my summer wine I’m sipping now…. the taste so fine Here in my seat among my treasure Reminds me of our springtime pleasure The evening chill brings back to mind In winters snow the children find An old flat log …….and scream with glee The toboggan rides and you hug me And that day of fun in swirling fog We lost our way and found a dog All tattered and wet …the look of strife He followed us home and shared our life The honey suckle with its clinging dew The dusky scent……. just drifting trough The autumn air helps me to find Images of you locked in my mind The sun is melting from my sight But thoughts of you on this sweet night Are caressing my heart with velvet hand With both my feet in golden sand Our seasons spent with joy were blessed When storm clouds broke we stood the test Together we’ll welcome with love sublime The magic of the autumn time [This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 09-13-2000).] |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Jon, Yet another wonderful poem with amazing, vivid details. An awesome description of the feelings and thoughts of two lovers. Alicia |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written... enjoyed your poem. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx yet again Alicia thanx Mike.......it's strange how some things invoke nice thoughts hey..  Jon |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Autumn leaves fall to the floor With winters frosts awoken A chilly wind blows from the north The summers spell is broken All the birds are flying south To live in warmer climes They'll be back when the snowy skies Give way to new spring times I'll promise now to hold your hand And watch the Robin sing If you will promise to keep me close And dance with me in spring Well I didn't know what to do with this so I put it here Jon[This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
These are wonderful Jon!! Excellent job as always! Your words have a way of always catching a hold of the reader. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx Child .....so nice to hear from you again....your very kind. Jon |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
What a lovely picture your words have brushed Jon, such vivid images throughout, and the story behind them, simply beautiful. Bonnie |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Jon, How wonderfully you have taken us to witness a hearts journey through the seasons changes with delghtful memory vignettes, precious moments, scenes of yesterday, today and the undying hope of a glorious future hand in hand with one so dear. Fantastic descriptive read! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Jon, I believe that what you added here fits perfectly. It's a wonderful addition. Alicia |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thankyou Bonnie Dennis and again Alicia.......your responses are always so warm and inspiring....Thanx Jon |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
*sniffles* Jon, this is a MASTERPIECE!! It is so vivid in describing love. I must go now, the emotion is shown so well in here...*more sniffles* --Little Girl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Jon! Wonderful poem! Denise |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Jon.... wow. Your poems always make me cry my eyes out...and I don't cry easily. This is by far one of the most beautiful things I have ever read....Your poems always have a way of drawing me into the picture you so vivdly paint. Thanks you for writing & posting this.........beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Jon; So lovely and romantic! The second part just as delightful. You really should repost someday and join the two. Beautiful writing. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
What can I say to you four ladies...save from I better send some tissues over...I really appreciate your kind words. thanx a million Jon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jon~ Well, color me happy ! There are just some lovely thoughts nestled here. Such tender images jump center-stage. I enjoyed the joy in each line - both poems ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx Marge your responses are very much appreciated....they're usually quite colourful too ......thanxJon |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
Jon, I've been away for a bit...wish you told me to return overstocked with double thick mens' tissues.. Oh, this is wonderful - like looking through a keyhole at someone's life and feeling left out. Sob!Helen |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Breathtaking. All of it is breathtaking. I love poetry about one of my favorite seasons and the things that go on in them. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
~*SIGH*~ I haven't read a sad poem and felt so happy before. The memories that were penned here made me smile, and the visions, well, there perfectly painted in my mind. Wonderful, wonderful! ~Sheri |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx Honey ,Temtress and Irie your comments are most appreciated ..thanx. Jon |
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