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Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

0 posted 2000-02-23 09:52 PM

Moment Of Time

Show my longing sensual eyes
of green
the golden coated keys
to passionate paradise.
Where romantic flowing
ballads of love
take on a caressing of soul
life of their own.
Let me slow dance within
velvety spun webs
of pure and delightful
enchantment of spirit.
Carry me to outer limits
of passions realms
where within a moment of time
I'll be refreshed.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-23 10:06 PM

NC...this is delicious and delightful!!!
another side to your talents..very well written,
take care, janet marie

...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.

Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Little_Spyro
Senior Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

2 posted 2000-02-24 01:46 AM

Makes me wish I wrote this...it's beautiful! Janet's right (as usual), you've got some incredible talent!

Keep 'em coming!

Little Spyro T. Dragon

Another Heather
Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 93
Canada

3 posted 2000-02-24 02:56 AM

I really like this! Especially:

"Let me slow dance
within velvety spun webs
of pure and delightful
enchantment of spirit"

Great job,once again.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-02-24 10:32 AM

So smooooooth, NC! This is magnificent!

Denise

Beverly
Member

since 2000-02-19

Posts 123
New Mexico

5 posted 2000-02-24 03:51 PM

I like this poem a lot! Sensual for sure! Keep posting!

Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

6 posted 2000-02-24 08:45 PM

Janet Marie, Oh, I have many sides...LOL Thank-you for reading.

Little_Spyro, Why thank-you for such a nice compliment.

Another Heather, Thank-you glad you read it and enjoyed.

Dsnyder, Thank-you very much.

Beverly, Thank-you kindly

Sasikat
Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL

7 posted 2000-02-24 10:32 PM

NC,
What an enchanting post. I really enjoyed reading it. Such passion and intimacy.
Sheila

A very silly boy
Junior Member

since 2000-02-23

Posts 16

8 posted 2000-02-25 01:18 AM

Nice poem. I liked the "romantic flowing" and the way the poem flowed softly from line to line like some gently meandering river.

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