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dreamer2524 New Member
since 2000-09-08
Posts 5florida |
as midnight cloak, begins to cover the evening sky. i sit in silence, as the wind dances around me. the wind so light of her feet, tell me of a message, from a one true love. the wind softly walks over, as she bends down to kiss my check, i hear you speak. so clear, so true, so filled with hope, and love. as the wind dances around me, engulfing me with your words, i smile, as i see you softly speak them. as midnight cloak has covered the evening sky, the winds dance has ended, i sit in silence holding onto the message, hold it dear to my heart, in the silence of the cloak. till the last beat of my heart i will always be with you.....kayte |
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gofor42 Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 143Arkansas |
I must admit, I like the idea of the wind dancing. "If you can't annoy somebody, there's little point in writing." --Kingsley Amis |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Me too! Say, maybe that would make a great title too!  Denise |
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dreamer2524 New Member
since 2000-09-08
Posts 5florida |
wind dancing that does sound like a cool name for the poem. glad you both liked it. till the last beat of my heart i will always be with you.....kayte |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dreamer~ I liked the entire way this poem moved - so lightly blown about the page. 'i sit in silence, as the wind dances around me. the wind so light of her feet' I favor a little different take on the title - 'Wind Softly Walks' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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