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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Cold Days I sense the cool breeze coming static unleashed my dry thoughts a quietness in the atmosphere and crispness in the walk I feel the cold wind coming pushing forth the clouds the bleakness of the outcome is marching torward me now I feel the sharpness of the air the smell of moth, now scents my wear snuggling deep within my hood drizzling rain, now makes it's claim Looking at the breaking clouds sun peaking through the trees knowing that the warmth within will subdue the winter's beak The sound of rain remain outside the fire burns bright within peanut's parched and popcorn balls makes winter days my friend |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Alle this is really great....yeah sometimes winters can be memorable and warm. Nice  Jon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This made me smile with contentment! Just lovely, Marcy! Denise |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love this one..thank you |
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gofor42 Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 143Arkansas |
I wish it would get cold here...I'm tired of triple-digit weather every day. Good read. "If you can't annoy somebody, there's little point in writing." --Kingsley Amis |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Marcy; This is so beautifully done. You've painted such a realistic picture with your poetic pen. I hate winter, but you make it sound so inviting! Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marcy, You're really on a roll gal, Another excellent descriptive narrative, describing the harsh conditions but making the best of them, a heart warming read! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcy~ If I were to like the winter cold - which I don't ...  I would particularly like this line - 'a quietness in the atmosphere and crispness in the walk' Literally, COOL writing ! Enjoyed it, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
This made me feel all warm is why I like the winter What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
You paint a warm and cozy picture with your words, It would seem you are a private person within, this reeks of warmth and happiness of a person at peace with her self. |
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