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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Five pointed wonder, Washed upon a beaten shore, Clinging on to live. What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, Excellent subject to frame in a haiku moment! I can almost smell the salty breeze! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
maria..this is wonderful! love it.. i always have mixed thoughts about whether to throw them back to the sea and wonder if theyll live..or take them home with pride at my prize for walking the beach! lol very nice haiku  hugs, dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beautiful Haiku! I can smell the salty air! Ellie |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I can see your footprints in the sand. Nice Jon |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thanks everyone What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maria~ Waves keep repeating Twinkling starfish on the shore Taken from the sea *I LOVE IT ! Those lovely creatures of the sea wound up as beautiful poetry. Thank you for sharing some inspiration. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Marge glad I could inspire you. And thanks both What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
glad i didnt miss this one,Maria |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
kalie- thanks What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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