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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Facial Expression Fragrant dewdrops of... heartfelt pleasure Trickling softly down in... rhythmic measure Cascading moments wrapped... around love Dynamically reaching through... stars above Hovering angels breath... waking me Delicately caressing words... so free Happiness coiled... tightly within Facial expression... exhibits a grin |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Oh, I love this!! This is so exqusite. Thanks for sending me off to work wearing a grin too! Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is so cool.thanks for sharing it with us..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Lost Dreamer, This is a tender, touching poem, and has also put a smile on my face :^) Dennis :^) |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Exquisite and gentle..gentle thoughts from a gentle soul I feel.....this is So nice. Jon |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this one brought a BIG smile to my face..thank you... esp like these lines: Happiness coiled.. tightly within such implication of the joy the poet is feeling! |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
...and dreamer, you made me smile with your poetic pen. Good write! Love, Marcy |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
WOW LD excellent piece beautiful and tender especially loved the second verse. "Think I'm - I'm lost among the undergrowth So much so I woke up I love you all the same" Manic street preachers You stole the sun from my heart. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Gloria! That grin is very becomming!  Denise |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
very nice!!!  you headed out this way any time soon???  |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
yep..i'm a big fan of that 2nd verse myself..your use of words there gives a warm fuzzy kind of feeling  wonderfully written! hugs, dg "i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson |
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