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MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
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0 posted 2000-09-05 10:53 PM

Falling Free

Sometimes when I dream at night
My thoughts come, overwhelmed.
Remembering how you touched my heart
While standing 'neath that elm.
Electric lips, igniting,
Captured in a trance.
Cradling me within arms of
Night's canvas, moonlight's dance.

I'll carry you for always,
Saturate my mind.
In harmony to paint the nights
With touch of you, sometimes.
You'll be my everlasting,
My food for hunger, thirst.
The taste of you sustaining me,
You'll be my loving curse.

Sometimes when I dream at night
I search the haze for you,
To taste your kiss, to share a touch,
To fade into your blue.
And each time brings me closer
To heights of ecstasy,
When sometimes becomes everytime
And my first time falling free.

M/M
*2k

[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-05-2000).]

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2000-09-06 02:31 AM

double dip..did it to me again, fair lady..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2000-09-06 09:35 AM

Maureen what can I say, but amazing poem. Wtitten with your heart and soul, and truly beautiful.

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

3 posted 2000-09-06 05:53 PM

'Electric lips' Damn that is some excellent writing, MMoon. This is a true expression of the feeling of love (believe me, I know). I hope to see more of this sometime soon.
--Little Girl

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-09-06 09:05 PM

Very beautiful, Maureen!

Denise

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
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5 posted 2000-09-07 07:16 AM

pegasus111

hmmm I do like double dip chocolate chip ice cream cones...how about you...
~~soft thanks and hugsss for your constant support

Maureen

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
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6 posted 2000-09-07 01:07 PM

Marsha

big smiles to you

MM

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
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7 posted 2000-09-09 12:54 PM

Little Girl ..electric lips...well those are wonderful to feel...thank you for reading
~~soft smiles

Maureen

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

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8 posted 2000-09-09 12:56 PM

thank you Denise
~~soft hugs and

Maureen

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