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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
I sit alone and think of the way you make me feel. And, the happiness you brought me, I wonder if it was real? I think of the gentleness that came through your eyes. When I saw you look at me, it made me want to cry. The softness in your voice that I heard when you spoke to me sent chills up and down my spine and melted my heart completely. I'ts been so very long since I've felt something so dear. Though we must be apart, in my heart, you're always near. I wonder if it'll begin? I wonder if it'll end? I wonder if we have a chance to make it 'round the bend? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sas..this is a BEAUTIFUL LOVE poem... so emotionally perfect...for ME its very hard to write a true love poem wihth out sounding sappy or corny..you made it look so EASY...very nice work...and I'm glad your back with us...thanks for your comments to my Pub poem...we saved ya a stool  take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Yes, there's always that chance, A second shot at true romance, Another pass at love was lost You vow to reclaim. But what of the cost? Yes, a chance you've always had To make it round the bend! The odds are good--don't be sad, Go out and try again! I really like this poem, Sasikat! Like Janet said, BEAUTIFUL!  I'd like to see you post more often in here, your work is great!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
This was a really great poem. The way you expressed these feelings in such a direct way without sounding too sappy is excellent. i look forward to seeing more of your work in the future. "The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it." -Dylan Thomas |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Beautiful flow and such grace, WRITE ON !!! Dennis :^) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! Simply beautiful!  Denise |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Sasikat- I love your peom. Expresses in word what everyone has at one time or another felt. Heartache & love so often stroll hand in hand. I look forward to reading more. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful love poem Sasikat ! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful poem! |
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Beverly Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123New Mexico |
Oh, Dennis took the words right out of my mouth... such flow and grace. This poem is just awesome! Keep posting! |
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