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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I see dreams, That are about to fall, I see streets, Without houses, I see trees, Without leaves, I see school, Without children, For a while, I die. What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
*shudders*...what an empty world!  So sad...but still a great poem, Maria!  Keep up the great work!Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Welcome fellow traveler..cold and lonely..there I be..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
mm.. stick me in a freezer why dontcha?! ^^ well.. this is beautiful, Maria.. just puts things into perspective, really.. Love, Lynne |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
You express your feelings so well in this poem...I just hope that you know that there is one thing that is not so empty..judging from how well this poem was written, I hope ywhen you look in the mirror you see a great poet!.........beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Little Spyro -thanks but an empty world never stays empty for long, thank god What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Pegasus- you live in a cold world too? Yu Lan- I wish I could write warm poetry tho Lady lost - I hope you see the same Thanks all What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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