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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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It's in the Eyes Morning gray, life's hold After-shock begins it's flow Stirs the heart of me Volatile midnight Forces within erupting Ending the unknown Mourning love, life's hold Tenderly seeking his know Wonders of his thoughts Reigning down today Sad within his blue, pooling At the heart of me MM 9*2k never did understand tne difference between senryu or haiku [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-03-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ Each of these is a lovely Senryu ... together they make an even lovelier grouping of your thoughts. Very nicely done !  ~*Marge*~ *Just cause you mentioned it - Haiku contains thoughts about nature or things that leave us in awe at a wonder of nature. Senryu contains other thoughts, feelings or emotions. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Maureen ~ thoughts and feelings you bring to life with your words...Steve B In releasing all What was thought lost, will return Stonger, forever |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Marge..I gots it now  I never paid attention I thought they were all haikus if in the pattern 5 7 5 ~~smiles Maureen |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderfully done, Maureen! Denise |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Steve B thank you releasing is the best therapy for me at the moment...writing my thoughts does help ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maureen, Terrific senryu expression! I like this alot! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
these are great images, Maureen..recovering? in any case, I love the word flow. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Well I don't care what they are ...it seems pretty powerful stuff..and as usual great to read.Wishes Jon [This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Denise {{hugs}} and thank you Dennis glad you liked...you are one of the experts over here in this field pegasus111 recovering? wish...am still bouncing..and trying not to hit any walls Jon thank you for the wishes..I will hold onto them tightly and use them to guide me ~~soft smiles and thank you to all Maureen |
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