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Honey Bunch
Member

since 2000-08-08

Posts 99
South Africa

0 posted 2000-09-02 05:10 AM

FROZEN LOVE

Wind on my face, life giving breath,
tickling, stirring, hope in my breast.
Sun shining down, the joining of lips,
warming inside as your tender kiss.

Pounding of rain, lustful desire,
flowing with need deep in my mind.
Birds as they sing, heart in full flight,
soaring, sweeping skies of delight.

Winter’s deep cold, freezing of souls,
stretching like icicles up to the moon.
Frozen in time, unthawed, preserved,
needing to be welcomed back home.

Nature apart, true to its form,
home to be real, firm to the touch,
but sun still the dawning of love
and night, forever, my heavenly bed.

Little_Spyro
Senior Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

1 posted 2000-09-02 07:12 PM

What a beautiful portrait you present Helen!

Beautiful imagery and the works...and it seems like it rhymes even though it doesn't, great effect! It's a masterpiece.

Little Spyro T. Dragon

Watching the poets
Passions' guardian dragon
Moves with the rhymes' flow.

Though my body be
Human, my heart and soul be
That of a dragon.

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-09-02 07:26 PM

((((((((((Phew)))))))).....a bit chilly.

But I like it

Jon

Honey Bunch
Member

since 2000-08-08

Posts 99
South Africa

3 posted 2000-09-03 03:03 AM

Thanks to both of you for responding. Much appreciated!

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

4 posted 2000-09-03 05:24 AM

Honey Bunch..you can warm my cold feet in winter anytime..lol... great piece

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-09-03 01:46 PM

No wonder I like the winter. . .

*Waiting for that first snowflake*

lol

This was excellent. . . I really liked it. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Honey Bunch
Member

since 2000-08-08

Posts 99
South Africa

6 posted 2000-09-03 02:16 PM

Pegasus, Thanks for responding! (We'd have a problem because I also have cold feet...lol)
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Sven, Thanks - glad you liked it. Where I come from summer is fast approaching but I envy you your anticipation of snow flakes.

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